Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Domestic Violence Comments

Rating: 5.0

She begs him to stop, she begs and she pleads,
but the harder she cries, the harder she bleeds.
She's wondering why he's hurting her so,
but her eyes are getting heavier with each stinging blow.
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charlotte marie peachey
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Ian Bowen 16 February 2010

Charlotte, you handled the subject matter with skill. 10/10 Regards, Ian

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charlotte marie peachey

charlotte marie peachey

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