Friday, October 6, 2017

Domestic Violence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the dark corner, she lay there
Love was the gift wrapped with fear
Gone were the days smiles were rocking
Now and then his fist did the talking.
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Michael Ordia
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Alison mujati 15 March 2018

Good poem, you may also read mine you made me believe while you were deceiving9

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Ordia M. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 October 2017

Such a great write, Ordia...... a huge 10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

When love like gift is wrapped with fear of violence this provokes thought entirely. This sometimes leads to death and so sad this is. An amazing thought provoking poem is shared here.10

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