Thursday, May 1, 2008

Domestic Shades 4 Comments

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The thief was the chieftain that night
Stole from five houses erst in full flight
Last was ours at late night
Must've been there enough sound definite
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Indira Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2019

You have so touchingly described about the theft in this poem. When you got ready to catch they fled way. They might be caught by the cop. I want to cite....Thief, thief' screamed my mind ready to fight / Nudged my husband with all my might......For dacoity hacked many houses of our site / And trust, cop could bravely trace them out right. Brilliant work.10

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Valsa George 12 April 2019

Such occurrences are now quite common. Those who come to steal know exactly at what time of the night, the people are fast asleep. However you hd a small intuition that there was something wrong in the house.But by the time, you got ready for action, the person had left. Thank God the police could catch the culprits! You have described a very adventurous scene with all its horror and suspense! A 10

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