Fresh like the first ray
Freshened like the tickled lotus
She's in her school
Beguiled to feel joyfully secured
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Ha..............ha! when you were reared and, at that stage of growth, you didn't have to deal with shoes and school...... like ur daughter did! isn't it AkkA :) VanakkaM -shree
good write...refreshing and scenic...talking visuals your poem bring in...10