Saturday, May 6, 2006

Domestic Rituals Comments

Rating: 5.0

She always washes the linens on Mondays.
Glancing out the back door
she regards the billowing sheets
and hears the distinct Snap! they make
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Sonny Rainshine
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R H 06 May 2006

I admire the way you have captured an ordinary, everyday chore and painted such a glorious picture of it. Vivid imagery and a satisfying last stanza. kind regards, Justine

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Linda Jenkinson 06 May 2006

a good description of laundry day...im off to bring mine in now...very enjoyable write...regards linda

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Danny Reynolds 06 May 2006

Really nice one this, Sonny. Danny

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