Thursday, October 6, 2011

Domestic Love Comments

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Domestic love why do I have bruises on my body
Domestic love why do you hit me when I look at somebody else Domestic love why did you nearly kill me Domestic love why did I crawl back in your arms in your Domestic love you promise me that you wouldn’t hit me, then your gave me a black eye
Domestic love why am I’m
laying in pool of blood is it because you shot me in my head
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machelle harris
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Dougie Darko 14 November 2011

Very nicely written poem, very deep! ! Good Job! !

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Amusing! Amusing! Great Work Lady Harris, Thats Why I Always Visit Your Page, Wonderful Stuff My Young Lady. I have quite a similar expression about violence on my page, recently posted, please visit it when time permits.

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Stefanie Fontker 10 October 2011

Incredible message! It's nice to see such an amazing poem that sends out the words that: domestic violence hurts! Lovely writing.

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I hope this isnt about you. interesting way of writing.

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Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

Excellent poem! Well written....But I think domestic love sometimes caress us when we are sad!

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