Sunday, January 15, 2017

Domestic Contentment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I sit
Hidden in my kitchen.
Safe from the world.
Safe from myself.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Rebecca Navarre 16 January 2017

Very Wonderfully Done! ! ! ! ! Hope! ! ! ! ! , You got to have some Fun With This! ! ! ! ! It Is Very Powerfully Put! ! ! ! ! Hope You See New Beauty(Every) Where! ! ! ! ! You Look! ! ! ! ! Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 January 2017

Interesting evocative muse with awesome twists of phrasing and metaphor. Wow basking cat' and yeah poetess switch on that pilot light, liked the way u put it. Kudos. U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too titled 'pay a visit to a riverbank'

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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