Domestic Abuse (C)8-12-07 Comments

All I have to say is Brillant! ! ! ! ! !

Hello, I really thought this poem was a great one, very well observed and great skill with the rhyming and rythym. A great poem about an awful side of life, and gives great advice at the end. kind regards andrew m

Very powerfully written. This should make us aware of what sometimes really goes on behind closed doors. Keep writing. <3

not too bad, i liked it. your poems really flow, they're powerful.

Hi! This is an upsetting piece. Try my piece 'Domestic'. Take care.

That was amazing ans very powerful! I like this poem a lot.

This poem is an eye-opener and sends out a powerful message...The 911 reminder is a fitting finale to a great piece...10++ from me Corey

A great poem, great flow, and a tight ending. Its great.

Great poem, it has a great flow to it. and a great message too!

Loving this 911 advice and a fitting termination to the poem...wish I had thought of that in my poem 'Rape & Revenge'

brill peom its the best ive read by a long shot well done keep up the good work love that u keep it real

Cory, you did excellent on this sad write, with a lot of imagery and emotion.I added one yesterday called (Our Children Are Dying)

you wrote it well that too on a worthy subject rhyme schemme is good too good work

Amazing! Your poems are good.

sad but happening........well the advice is right...on one should stand abuse...well penned

this poem has great rhythm. its very well written.

Enjoyed your public statement on abuse particularly the advice call 911

you are brave...........keep writing! !

very simple...9 1 1...a great protector of your people