Domestic Comments

Darling, you always manage to say SO MUCH with so few words. It is a trick I have never yet mastered. Love this one. There must be a home waiting to house your heart! HG: -) xx

There is a Home away from home, It is covered with a pleasure dome. We came from there, there we go, We are homesick for lurking glow.

Very true, very true.Homeless heart is just a house of emptied love.10+++++Thanks for sharing

nice one, so much said with jsut a few words

In this poem somebody feels like one hasn't been back at home again.

Finding love is the key to this sick heart - much to contemplate in this short musing Onelia - another intense piece from your gifted pen. justine.

Very cute penning, a lot said in so few words (as David already commented) . I love what you say Onelia, it's very clever and your heart is still waiting for it's home - understand.... The title makes me think you had a 'domestic' as we would use here for a bit of a fight between loved ones. A lovely little poem. HG: -) xx

ouch....so short, but so true. I love how you connect w/ your inner thoughts in every poem so well...your at home contemplating true love which you lack, it seems.

A veritable wee gem here, succinct and tragically true as it so often is. t x

Written simply but to great effect. Brilliant, Onelia.

homesick - heartsick; a home in the heart. The poignancy is undeniable. Rgds, Ivan

home when wishful by the heart as the heart when heartful by the home............superb write yet luscious and soft, i do enjoy,10/10, thanks for sharing

Leleee strahotno, da da da mnogo e yako! Vurha e tova! Haresva mi. Haha. LOL F

Excellent haiku, loved every word,