Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Dolphins Comments

Rating: 5.0

He regretted he cannot send me back in the world as a man,
I made so much ugly the earth with my sins,
The libel of my sins is nothing but to imprison my soul in an animal,
However, I had done a few good deeds,
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 September 2022

A wonderful poem sir. I love the theme, the title and the contents of this excellent poem. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 February 2015

Interesting composition really. Very nicely penned......10

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Valsa George 24 February 2015

He was caught by me watching bikini girls, On the shore of a sea with a long telescope, I shouted at him you naughty old man, Now we know this is your hobby! The dolphin has caught you red handed young (old?) man! A Very amusing write! My 10

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Khalid Saifullah 24 February 2015

An interesting write, having elements of fun and satire.................10

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