Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Dolphin Comments

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Jump up like a dolphin out of the water.
Use your fins to go far.

You may feel down and like your sinking down lower,
But just come up for air once in a while.
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Christina J. Williams
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Brian Jani 09 June 2014

Christina i am a fan of your poem keep it up

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Vikrant Jog 18 October 2012

Do some flips and tricks too. Let the world see the amazing you. Now go swim in the ocean with the big creatures. For today the world is ready for you to jump up and shine. I loved these metaphorical lines...

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