Monday, October 30, 2006

Dolphin Comments

Rating: 4.8

Do I count
the days
since you left
till the time…
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Chhavi Anupam
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Brian Jani 09 June 2014

Wow this is brilliant

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 July 2008

I have a basic problem with the way this poem is structured. Other than that, I thought the presentation of the message was done well. The writer is good and very creative. GW62

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This analogy is superb. t x

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