Dolls Of Clay Comments

beautiful title and a sensitive poem. and what for the inner mirror! I am remembering the Punjabi lines.. mitti da baava

waves of your laughter when join the waves of quakes coming from the pond, I listen to the beats of life that are produced by merging of two waves, A well crafted beautiful poem coupling the beauty of Nature and the tender charm of an innocent child! Loved reading it and experienced a refreshing feel!

Nature and life are blissful and inseparable even when we talk of ugliness for a while. One can't be sure if you are a poet of nature or of life but one thing is sure, your poetry is indeed a celebration of life. Thanks for sharing. I quote: between zigzag rows of colorful flowers / trying to catch rainbow butterflies, I smile on this dance of life / I thank nature who is training you