Monday, July 20, 2020

Dolls Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beware those creepy little dolls,
The ones with eyes so real.
For behind their red ruby lips,
Lies evil they try to conceal...
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 27 July 2020

Dominic many thanks for your kind comment and its not the dolls one has to worry about, it's the trolls! Thanks again and take care

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Shaun Cronick 27 July 2020

Thank you Rose Marie for another kind and generous comment. Glad you enjoyed it for I like to write a dark one after the sun has set! Thanks again and I wish you well.

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Dominic Windram 22 July 2020

Wow what an interesting tale about Carl Guttenburg...truly rerrifying! I wonder if it inspired the Chucky character from the Child's Play series? I really like the contrast you make between religious virtues and downright evil throughout this poem. Anyway, it's a truly terrifying ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2020

A scary story so vividly and beautifully presented and crafted. Like a horror movie that is so frightening. Another one of a kind write with superb imagery and great rhyme. Shaun Cronick can weave poems out from anything.

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