Here is a doll for you, terrorist
Bloodstained
Which was fondled by my daughter
While she was exploded by the bomb
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Beautifully crafted poem that brilliantly expressed the agonies and sadness of a mother. Yes, there is no greater tragedy when a child is taken so early by senseless killings
Please read my poem 'Mourning The Death of Innocent Flowers', based on the theme.
A really heart touching write ! A devil rules the heart of terrorists.How can they feel the pain of a mother whose child dies by bombs of insanity?
This poem by CNPremkumar is superior in story and its presentation. Extraordinary poetic skill of presenting a big story in a poem that is heartwarming true and inspiring. A masterpiece that powerfully attacking the horror of terrorism.
Your opinion is absolutely true. No one can read this poem without tears in their eyes. I read this poem to my daughter who was 12 years old. She cried for days on the memories of the poem. It is life like. Amazing!
The emotions conveyed through the simple words deeply touch the heart of the readers. Truly a masterpiece.
Very touching lines to explain the sorrow one goes through when his daughter gets killed in terror attack.
its touching with the meaning and the lost of humanity. Novel perspective. Thank you
a heart touching poem. i really liked it. thankx for sharing
Wow! A totally intense and relevant poem, tears at your heart, can feel the pain and anguish of your child being killed so horrendously! Powerfully poignant and heart wrenching words stating the truth. Very emotional, filled with compassion.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++Thank you for sharing these truths. RoseAnn
Terrorists who kill the children perhaps are such a doll made by their designer who has no such emotional quality to communicate with the common people. Just their life has been transformed into machine to serve the ordered purpose by their Bosses. Otherwise its a sensitive poem for the common readers.
Religion kills more than war. These mindless people bath in human blood. A very sensitive poem. Simple words, yet very powerful.
wow..............mindblowing poem...... smooth flow of emotions...grt n simple use of words......grt theme.......apt title......so powerful......d sorrows n anger of a mom is clearly shown....u r really a poemhunter...
Absolutely right opinion. The poem is superb in emotional expressions and clear narrations.
I appreciate this spontaneous opinion. The poem is powerful with simple use of words. The smooth flow of emotions is amazing.
You are expressing the unspoken and unutterable words in the hearts of those who, powerless to prevent are the victims of the vicious cycle of violence and death sponsored by the Devil, who came to kill, steal and destroy St. John 10: 10. Only Jesus Christ [God] can and will bring an end to and punish the acts of terrorism[sponsored by sin] and reward the victims with justice and eternal life if they accept! Jesus came to give eternal, abundant life. [John 10: 10]! That will happen at the last day when 'Every knee shall bow and every tongue confess that Jesus is Lord to the glory of God, the father' Phil.2: 1-10. God bless you! Continue writing!
It's a very powerful poem full of emotions of anger, frustration, acceptance, revenge and more. It's a nice way of appealing to the terrorists. The poem is filled with the pain of a mother whose child was killed so brutally. I hope you find peace and consolation. And writing about it is one way of finding it, especially if one can write so well as you do. Thanks for sharing it.
A very beautiful poem written with compassion and love for one's child. My country has also been attack by these terrorist and with sad, sad results. Good luck to you and your family.
Heart warming and touching. I can not believe it is your imagination! How beautifully you have narrated the story through the poem. No one can stop reading it fully. Who can read it without keeping their eyes wet! ! ! ? ? ?
‘Of terror and death/Sponsored by wealthy nations of greed’ ~ I agree one hundred percent ‘The religions kill more than wars’ ~ Religion never kills but wrong interpretations by fanatics kiill ‘In return let me bear a child from you /In my womb’ ~ Indeed most touchy and eyes wetting lines to me … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Premkumar-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Yes. Very heart-touching poem which explains the horrors of terrorism in simple but emotionally strong presentation skills of the learned poet. This poem must be taught in our schools to teach our children the horrifying impact of terrorism.
Yes. Most eyes wetting lines. The heart broken mother is very clearly narrated with poetic clarity. Very sentimental poem depicting motherly love. The cry of the mother who lost her child due to terrorism. This poem is suitable for teaching in schools for understanding the atrocities of terrorism.
Liked how this poem was woven which was embellished with crystalline images and clarity of words. Majority if not all could relate to this magnificent and touching poem. To my Poem List.