Monday, November 9, 2009

Dolce Far Niente, A Sequel* Comments

Rating: 3.2

remember our fog walk
of a winter morning...?

our hands closely clasped
...
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indira babbellapati
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Sonya Florentino 10 November 2009

what a beautfiful breathtaking memory....and as I can see from the earlier poem, the feeling of warmth has carried you through cold days.....

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 November 2009

these r such lovely lines.... gud attempt

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Ranjit Ravindran 09 November 2009

Nicely done. Liked these lines ........................................... we took each step with those stars guiding us... ...........................................

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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