Sunday, April 14, 2024

Dogs, Oh Loyal And Trusted Friends, Why Have You Started Barking Now. Comments

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Dogs, oh loyal and trusted friends
sitting quietly, tails wagging without end
their master's friend, oh what a sight
causing chaos and havoc with all their might
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

I'm unable to be sure I understand who is who and what is what as you speak of dog(s) and master(s) and friend(s) , and AVOID using the words Jew(s) , Muslim(s) , Hamas, Iran, U.S., Russia, Ukraine, Palestinian(s) , etc.

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

Asim, your poem (its rhymes and 'flow') are poetically pleasing for me. But, I have trouble (and therefor have given up) trying to figure it out! !

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

(cont.) '..he establishment of Israel on most of the Mandate's territory, and the control of the Gaza Strip and the West Bank by Egypt and Jordan, respectively.'

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

The 1947 United Nations Partition Plan for Palestine triggered the 1948 Palestine war, which saw the expulsion and flight of most Palestinian Arabs, ' (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

(cont.) Arabic in origin, Mohamed means 'praiseworthy' or 'commendable' from the verb ḥammada. In its most widely recognised form, the name holds high regard in its ties to the founder of Islam—the prophet Muhammad.'

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

My upbringing in the U.S. was Christian, but I no longer believe in ANY 'god' or 'God'. My PH friend Asim (M. Asim Nehal) I believe is (or was 'born') a Muslim, based partly on my belief that 'M.' stands for one of the M-names in the following: (cont.)

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Sheeya Hacks 14 April 2024

Well said, read my poem Hiw I wonder what they are!

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Sando Hussam 14 April 2024

They only know barking when they see their own rights are getting hurt not otherwise.

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Poetic Sky 14 April 2024

Sake of selling their weapons, arms and ammunitions, they only want business and money, power is gone out of their hands.Shame on all of them.

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Poetic Sky 14 April 2024

I agree, they are not humanitarian but biased with prejudiced mind and supports the killer just for the

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