Monday, June 14, 2021

Dogs And Horses Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a stalking horse, she was making moves,
The night was gorgeous and the party was cool.

In a big hall, small groups were distinguishable,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 June 2021

I do understand this satyrical poem, and for the gift of humor 5 Stars Full, Mr.Asim Sir! I have enjoyed enormously this fantastic poem.

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Poetic Sky 16 June 2021

Interesting poem.

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Indira Renganathan 15 June 2021

A real life event gifted with fun .... much interesting...5*****

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 June 2021

Both faithful animals but misused and abused by humans. The party scene is satirical and intriguing. LOL 5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 June 2021

I think it's a nice one too. Bravo!

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Kostas Lagos 14 June 2021

Nice one! ! !

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Varsha M 14 June 2021

Hahaha sir right under the nose of the wife. This could be dangerous.

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