Saturday, July 19, 2014

Dog-Days (Selected Minor Audacities) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A big old bulldog
out in the backyard,
is like life, letting you know getting in is easy,
going through's going to be damned hard.
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 16 August 2014

To me, the last two verses could be interspersed between every two verses (like a song refrain) but I admit that would make the poem awfully long. But I really enjoyed what you did with this one.

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Dave Walker 29 July 2014

A great poem, life is a strange thing, it can be very hard to understand.

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Sara Fielder 23 July 2014

I suppose we have to endure the bad as much as we relish the good in life Smoky to keep the scales balanced. That we never take any of it for granted. Good piece this.

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