Saturday, June 20, 2009

Dog Walking Comments

Rating: 3.3

Eager exit out the door
collecting carrier bags from the floor.
Happy, hopeful, scents the air
leaving puddles everywhere.
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Black Mendilouche
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Susan Jarvis 23 June 2009

This vivacious poem appeals to all the senses - love the onomatopoeic feet; I can hear dog and owner running home!

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Sally Carter 22 June 2009

Full of energy! Great fun.

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