Thursday, May 3, 2007

Dog Tired Revisited Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you would come to me now,
now that the sweltering day is through;
the tick weed sparkles with dew,
and the dark night
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William Jackson
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Cin Sweet 10 May 2007

A sensual heart filled with passion, waiting to be unleashed and shared with a would be lover. Magic poem.

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Tranquil Ocean 04 May 2007

An impassioned cry which would reach everyone's heart. Well rendered and a nice, smooth structure Love...TO

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My Impassioned Quill 03 May 2007

Very nice, William. Like it much. My IQ

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William Jackson

William Jackson

San Antonio, Texas
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