Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Dog: Forward Or Backward Comments

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Word 'dog' is 'god' spelled backward, yes?
And both could be a friend,
A bone you throw to Deity
Might save you in the end.
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Long Tooth
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Bri Edwards 30 March 2017

Long Tooth, have you been to the dentist recently? no. dog is god, not God, spelled backward! favorite lines [among many]: A dog is nature’s way to show A home is not a zoo! You don’t need bars to keep him in, The problem's pee and poo! ..................................i'm toilet-oriented! And training God is just a snap, You listen, rarely speak, His treats are worth far more than gold, Correction, not critique.......................here, lines one and four are a bit unclear to ME. i guess i can interpret All aboard! as i see fit, or just think of it as another nice rhyme. overall i enjoyed this rhyming comparison a lot. i'm not sure what sort of picking up after men God does. how about the women? i thought that was THEIR job! ! a nice one, LONG TOOTH! i'll visit the page and leave most of this message as my comment. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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