Dog Fight Comments

The cut throat competition and intensified struggle for existence has made human beings selfish and self centered.. The dog like fights and barking on each other is it's direct consequence, in my opinion. A delicate aspect of human life and psyche has been wonderfully depicted in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

Aloha Hasmukh... I have a thought and more, in these moments reflecting upon your thinking man's words... 'We' are generally ruled by the quantity of things considered as important' or 'necessary'... and considering that humankind values nothing that the universe deems as such... it would appear that 'we' are doomed to suffer the most horrible of ends... ''We', ill exponentially reproduce and consume all of the total energies of this globe, as does the most virulent virus... then we will eat each other until there is no one remaining, and this marble in the vastness of this galaxy will be dead... I have taken the liberty to 'pull' a few vivid messages from this particular post... Human clearly visible clearly reflected irritation, reaction; alone gone, fighting, grabbing for things easy spoils from both wrong and right quarrelling, abusive, marred by greediness human; visible, reflecting individuals, living alone... something sad about discovering the innermost thoughts and messages within a work of words... or Am I just Whistling Dixie? Thank you for this very fine thought provoking post... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

very beautiful sir, namaskar..

It is marred by behavior Even though the pattern is all over We show our greediness in open And spoil heavenly atmosphere and turn