Monday, March 26, 2007

Dog Eat God World! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surrounded by barbarians
in their plastic dog eat god world,
I burn in flames of ignorance,
unaware of what will unfurl.
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Michael Fischer
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Michael Gale 07 April 2007

Great poem Michael. I think it's smooth enough for me anyways. An easy tenner here. I like it-we are our own enemy when we open our mouth's. Great write kind sir. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Chris Mendros 04 April 2007

strong stuff. You've got a lot of words in your arsenal. Could be smoother, but that might take off some of the edge. Good work. cm

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Brian Dorn 31 March 2007

Good write, Michael... hard hitting and powefully worded. Well done! ! Brian

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