Surrounded by barbarians
in their plastic dog eat god world,
I burn in flames of ignorance,
unaware of what will unfurl.
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strong stuff. You've got a lot of words in your arsenal. Could be smoother, but that might take off some of the edge. Good work. cm
Good write, Michael... hard hitting and powefully worded. Well done! ! Brian
Great poem Michael. I think it's smooth enough for me anyways. An easy tenner here. I like it-we are our own enemy when we open our mouth's. Great write kind sir. God bless all poets-MJG.