Doesn'T Matter Comments

Dear Cynthia, This surely shows a ton of promise. I like to encourage younger writers so they don't have to go what I went through to arrive at this stage of my writing career. May I be so bold as to offer you some advise? Try not to concern yourself too much regarding rhyme; it often distracts one's true intent. Of course this doesn't always apply, I just believe too many beginning poets rely on it too much. Also watch the spelling. I truly hope this helps. Sincerely sorry if I offended you at all; just trying to give a little guidance, that's all. Gregory PS: the problems/solve them rhyme was pretty cool. Considering your age, I'm rating this at an excellent 8. Take care and keep penning those poems!