Monday, November 2, 2015

Does The Moon Know? Comments

Rating: 4.8

It’s both a beautiful blessing and a cruel curse
To be one of the dreamers that walk about the world
I know it’s been said before
It just haunts my mind how the sun always comes
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Leah Ayliffe
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Castellenas John 20 March 2019

The moon does knows and the moon keep our secrets private. I enjoyed the tale. Always nice to dance with the moon above. Wonderful poetry. You make me want to write.

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Fog Runner 21 January 2016

Self-absorption skillfully justified with an unpredictable flow of romantic reflections on the sun and moon. I am actually awed and more than like this. I LOVE it.

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Paul Davies 20 December 2015

I was forty years working this out, about 350,000 hours of existence. Almost too late! But at least all who I'm with in the scratchy noise remaining know they are Lakshmi.

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Melvina Germain 03 November 2015

It was a grand pleasure to read this amazing write, your words embraced me and I do appreciate visiting the inner core...how absolutely lovely...Thank you.....

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