Does Poetry More Fulfill Your Mind Comments

A great poem with wonderful tips for writing poem.----' When writing do poems seem to drown when reading tumble to the ground; just rhyme these two words, light and bright, and everything will be alright.'

this poem as beautiful as it comes Bravo!

2) the ocean blue, the forest green but, if sensitivities lack, it's okay to compose in black. Loveliest end rhymes in thy poetry, Captain Sir!

1) I recite the beautiful core of thy poetry, Captain Cur: When writing do poems seem to drown when reading tumble to the ground; just rhyme these two words, light and bright, and everything will be alright. The finer themes that lift the scene

Oh, How awesome! .. Beautiful thoughts, beautifully written! .. Again such true poetry of beautiful thought and beautiful rhyme! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Just discovered your work, and it looks like good, frolicking fun to read! What better sailing than on the high seas of sound and rhythm ~ an infinite reach! Whenever I come into a patch of bad weather, I always repeat to myself the phrase, 'lighter and brighter is the way.' I've always found it soothing, implying that 'this too shall pass.' I was pleasantly surprised to see a similar line appearing in these verses. Well done on a very enjoyable poem! :)

oh, yes, I plastered a 10 all over this!

Loved. This. Poem. No wonder your lines flow! ! Do words flow smooth like in a dream or struggle hard to swim upstream? If sometimes poems do seem to drown when reading tumble to the ground- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -You been standing behind me while I sit at my desk struggling with recalcitrant lines and runaway words? ? ? Thank you for this encouraging poem, Captain o Captain. ;)

shall the cauldron be hot, Captain Cur?

Thank captain.. This lesson I will keep in mind