Wednesday, January 4, 2006

Does It Go Away When You Close Your Eyes? Comments

Rating: 3.8

Troubled life leaves troubled mind,
Sleep the only answer I can find.
Sleep brings ignorance, with that comes bliss,
Past caring what you miss.
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Joy Vanderhelm 13 January 2006

Oooh! I got chills. This is good, the rhyme is wonderful and the power in each line drives the meaning forward. Very, very good.

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