Monday, December 15, 2014

Does God Ever Fart? ...... [sacrilege; God: Humor? ; Fantasy; Kind Of Short] Comments

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I'm glad that God rested to end His strenuous week,
for if, instead, He had farted I'm sure the Earth would creak....,
and not just a little creak but a GREAT BIG CREAK,
so much in fact it would rock the oceans and scare the meek.
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Bri Edwards
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Hira Akhtar 30 December 2014

It's hilarious like every time ;)

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Savita Tyagi 21 December 2014

Funny and entertaining! Reminded me couple of very ancient Vedic verses of some what same imagination.

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Abekah Emmanuel 21 December 2014

Well, poetically interesting and entertaining but quite.misleading. Is the poet saying that, this fatal mockery which he is making of a Being who later apologizes to, is as a result of bad influences from a friend? Who among us noble hunters, would make a contemptious joke about a Judge whose Supremacy and rulings are well known to us? At least, from law, I know that Ignorance of the law is no excuse. Haaaa But needless to mention, your theory sounds interesting and more convincing when the reader equates your 'God' to Darwin's atom or perhaps Spinoza's God not God as in the Christian conception, because we know that atoms emit energy when they crack...whatever they say....so perhaps, the atom farts! Funny piece..haaaaaaa...

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Darlene Walsh 20 December 2014

How rudely entertaining and funny. Not sure about God the Father, but I'm pretty sure Jesus was quite capable of all bodily functions. Darla :)

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