Sunday, May 7, 2006

Doe 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her brown eyes peek
through leaves cautiously.
Sudden movement frightened
her into this forest hiding place.
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Joyce Chelmo
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Duncan Wyllie 21 May 2006

This is so gentle, so fragile, beautiful! , really! and I enjoyed the style Love Duncan XXX

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Joyce Chelmo 07 May 2006

Thank you Tai, the doe is my totem so I describe her often. I just posted it today so I'm not sure why you think players don't like it. Joyce

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***** ********* 07 May 2006

Nice description Joyce...hope there is nothing wrong with this poem, because I give you 10 and some players don't like it apparently! HRTai

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