Tuesday, November 1, 2005

Dodging Bullets Comments

Rating: 3.5

Dodging bullets
gathering speed
get over or rid of
the things that I need
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Carsten Thomsen
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Roong S 23 July 2012

nice flow..keep writing!

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Liz Munro 01 November 2005

nice build up to the final stanza. liz

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