Tuesday, April 24, 2007

(dodge Dave Tale) Tele' Tinkle Tales Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dodgy Dave the Vicar
had to say his sermon quicker
because in his pocket he forgot
to turn his tele' tinkle off.
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JoAnn McGrath
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Carol Gall 14 September 2009

this is really great dave in jail

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Meggie Gultiano 21 August 2007

now i know..you have a good sense of humor..you have captured well the ins and outs of Dodge Dave..so well penned, Jojo..i enjoyed it. top marks fro me.. love and hugs, Meggie

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Very funny Joanne, lol! Another tale in the life of Dave...too funny.Great rhyme scheme and a nice easy read.Thanx so much for sharing this well written piece. Take care of U.......... =Shelley=

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Daniel Murphy 04 May 2007

lol totally love this poem-you've great humour just as I thought! just getting round to reading your stuff now believe it or not after you being so nice and commenting on mine :) Danny xxx

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... Sheila 30 April 2007

Too funny! It's amazing you got this all written before the 'dinosaur' threw you out! LOL It's nice to read a poem, now and then, that makes you laugh and this one did. Great job and a big old ten!

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David Harris 25 April 2007

JoAnn, This little piece just tinkled my funny bone. GREAT WRITE and just as funny as The Vicar Is Quicker. Thank you for another of my Tales. As they happen I'll tell you and you can do a series of them. You got a ten from me. Dodgy Dave

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