'Doddappa's Legacy: An Inheritance Saga Of Struggle And Sacrifice' Comments
In the aftermath of the bachelor's silent closure,
A plot with a building wearied and older,
The nephew-in-law seeks to resolve the tangle,
Amidst power struggles, an intricate wrangle.
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The theme, the poetic narrative and the rhyme scheme make the poem beautiful. But, the poet repeats herself in stanza after stanza. The entire poem could very well have been scripted in two or three stanzas. I would definitely request the poet to re-craft the poem in 12 lines.
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8/2/2025 1:16:51 PM # 1.0.0
2) The poet's note accompanying the poem is, to put it in one word, superfluous.