Saturday, August 6, 2005

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why you don't leave me alone,
living in this corner,
hididing from you,
you slap me again and again,
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salma mansoor
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Rebekah R 21 December 2005

This poem is quite telling. Especially the last two lines. Theres something about this that I really like. Congratulations :) -Bekkie

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