Doctor's Smoke Jar Comments

hello, it's really nice that you messaged me on my poems, iv'e only just joined the site and it's wonderful that already someone has read them and understood them. thank you. i think your poems are great, they have lots of depth. i particularly like this poem 'Doctor's smoke jar'. i couldn't send you a message, so i just commented, hope thats ok. - maria

poor you, this is pretty graphic but it also symbolises fighting back, am i right? xx