Tuesday, May 13, 2014

*do You Want To Break Up? (2.01) Comments

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I find her in silence
close to the window
on the edge of a chair,
with her stare galloping
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A Waltz For Zizi
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Colleen Courtney 13 May 2014

Nice! Vividly describes the poets feelings and emotions. Nicely written poem!

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Red Skye 13 May 2014

I love this so much. (Tears swelled in my eyes) its not nice to feel like this. sometimes things can get boring. love can too. there's never a simple way to tell some one you want to leave. I like this very much. Red Skye.

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