Saturday, December 24, 2011

Do You Want This? Comments

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'Do you want this?
Come and get it.'

I slept with dreams.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 24 December 2011

nice poem....Do you really want this nice question too, very well crafted....very beautiful you can also check my poems and comment on it.....thanks for sharing

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Sandra J. 24 December 2011

Amazing, your words just float of the tongue, like a steady melody, it's really quite wonderful.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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