Do you see what I see? 
                      The wind moving through the trees.
                               Do you hear what I hear? 
                       It is the voice of God calling to you.
                
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I liked this one...you're format is great...and cretics is spelled critics* spelling is major...but yours is good

 
                     
                
Good poem keep shouting for the planet one day someone might take heed 10 Chris