Monday, July 22, 2013

Do You See It? Comments

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The world has trained eyes to see what they want
Everywhere that We go we see the worlds trained thoughts
I Never saw It before until I accepted the Saviors soul
Now my eyes are opened to satins entertainment modo
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Jason Atkinson
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Roseann Shawiak 20 October 2013

Thank you for your inspiring comments, Jason. Have you read any of my poems along the same line as your Do You See It? poem? I invite you to read them when you get a chance. Let me know what you think. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 20 October 2013

Thank you for your inspiring comments, Jason. Have you read any of my poems along the same line as your Do You See It? poem? I invite you to read them when you get a chance. Let me know what you think. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 20 October 2013

Awesome poem - I love it! ! You told it so well, Jason. Children need our love and attention, not games and material things. You write well of important aspects of life. Continue writing and if it's alright I'll keep reading your poetry as time permits. RoseAnn

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