Tell me how was your day
Since I could not see.
Tell me how you went your way,
As if you don't remember me.
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thats a question i would to ask my first love. im sure everyone does... good work keep writing :)
my heart was pounding when i read this one...wow ur really great! ~love Hazel
This is very well writen. Add like a story to it and it could be a narrative which im told can lead to some pretty great songs. :) Keep writing! Ashley
Great poem! Great words and great poet! !