Monday, January 25, 2010

Do You Remember Me! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you remember me?
When you held me shackled in captivity
Stolen from the Motherland
Stripping me of my pride of just being a man.
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Lana Grissom
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Rahul Kirti 08 February 2010

gud buddy...nice..with..i can sense the emotion...-gr8

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Akram Awadat 06 February 2010

deep meaning, great lines

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James B. Earley 03 February 2010

An excellent composition my friend! Please read 'Sultry Summer's Evening.'

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Michael Dallas 03 February 2010

Very deep topic, I can relate. I really do enjoy your writing, keep up the good work!

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Justin Unanue 27 January 2010

Some really great lines in here, very enjoyable poem. I was pleased to read it.10/10

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David Robinson 26 January 2010

This one struck my soul....to be 'as black as I want to be' .....wow, something I can only ponder......

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