Do you remember love?
It was so long ago;
Yet I remember dearest one,
And I want you to know.
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A simple message, beautifully expressed. You have said just what you wanted/needed to say. It is a common feeling, but you have said it in a fresh way.
This is perfectly said, succinct and sweet. I very good write. I do not know many who have not been in this exact state of mind.
I really like this poem, it reminds me of so many things. Beautifully written, great work.
Your poem is romps beautifully down the page and it almost sings as it rhymes. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson