Monday, November 19, 2012

Do You Remember? Comments

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I left my life with you, do you remember?
That hollow day of sharpened rain and even sharper words.
Each step I took away from you, each leaden pace, defeated me.
Your voice, once soft and lyrical, now cold and forged from steel.
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Owain Glyn
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Janet Budd 07 January 2013

Your serious side's touch is very strong, disillusion cannot be diluted, can it!

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Ruby Honeytip 25 December 2012

Ouch! Felt this one like a punch to the belly! I feel for anybody who has ever felt this way. Group hug anybody? ? This is beautifully written [3

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Barbara Nixon 15 December 2012

Powerful poem, very touching and emotional, just beautiful.

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