do you remember
our first date
i do
you had me out so late
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aaaww oh my god.... that is a really REALLY wonderful, beautiful, amazing poem i have ever read! ! ! great job.... no one could say that your poem wasn't from your heart.. because it so was! ! i love it, thanks so much for sharing :)
ahhhh i never anticipated a sad ending........it was looking such a passionate and sweet poem....... excellent poem........ ;) ....
this was a good poem......until the ending....which made it great! very emotional and real, great job! ~