Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Do You Remember....? Comments

Rating: 5.0

this poem is still 'under construction', I just don't know how to express my feelings in a way that makes sense and sounds nice. If anyone's got any idea how to improve this poem, please write me. I'd be grateful for help.

Sometimes when I think of you
the memories make me smile
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jools England
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Akram Awadat 01 November 2009

good poem well done 10

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Joseph Poewhit 04 November 2008

Poem seems pretty complete

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