Friday, February 9, 2007

Do You Remember Comments

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Do you remember the day
You told him that you cared
When everything seemed so simple
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Alison Smith
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Alison Cassidy 11 February 2007

Beautiful piece - well contructed, a great subject and a brilliant conclusion. Clever as well as poignant. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx

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David Harris 10 February 2007

Alison, a beautiful little piece very poignant, especially the last lines. Another great poem. Keep up the good work. David

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Jim Foulk 09 February 2007

beautiful piece of poetry. well penned, well said.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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