Do You Remember Comments

do you remember the promise you made. 'you are ever mine'- thus did you said. forgotten those words now mean nothing. but, sharp in the silence still do they ring. Thank you! Now I remember someone's promises blown by the wind. But time is great to heal every broken promises and replace it with awesome things.

There is rhythm in your words and expression.A lovely write, thanks for sharing.

what a scintillating expression of love in your poetic words....great poem..10 points..