Monday, August 22, 2011

Do You Really Love Me? Comments

Rating: 5.0

She say she really love me,
when your lost in emotions so thugly,
that's firing slugs in me till the clip's empty,
can't she see how much she meant 2 me.
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Dylan Gaudreault
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Dickson Mseti 23 August 2011

Your sinciality made this poem reality. Finish this poem I wish to see it's end.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 August 2011

Impressive! A few words well penned that have become like small sparks that start a huge fire! Only time can tell! Definitely, Poetry is on your blood! Keep it up! Keep giving us more of your talented writes! Thanks for sharing! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Stefanie Fontker 22 August 2011

Interesting, I like this. This is some great poetry. I will wait for your continuation.

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