Do You Not Father Me Comments

Dylan you went far too young.Brilliant poetry!

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nice one...agaisnt time and tide... lovely poem...10 Against time and tide You will correct And act For the generations ahead And well read Give no second thought As we have fought Against time and tide Now you have to decide

I am, the tower told, felled by a timeless stroke, Who razed my wooden folly stands aghast, - - - - - - I haven't slept in days now, so maybe that is why I keep seeing The Tower of Babel in myriad places in this poem

This is indeed a poem. Lovely!

Summer scene... thanks for posting....

Folly! ! Thanks for sharing.

Stunning and perpetually epic for all ages & genres....An empowering theme of Never Give Up for what your Heart and providence says is all good and righteous'''....Tho' you're gone from this poetic plane...You still fly high o'er it and around it....You Rock, indeed!

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