Tuesday, February 20, 2024

Do You Miss Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

My heart doth ache with longing deep.
I am but little, shy and lazy too,
yet yearn for sunrise,
all my heart doth pursue.
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Juhaina Shiraz
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Bri Edwards 06 March 2024

I THINK you are comparing the 'sun' (that nearby star) to a person who you love. Good luck with THAT! ! ! Don't get 'burned'. **** 4 stars. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 06 March 2024

Juhaina, You seem to use 'tease' as a noun and I did not 'get' your meaning. I looked up tease: . COUNTABLE NOUN If you refer to someone as a tease, you mean that they like laughing at people or making jokes about them.' I STILL don't 'get it'.

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Gordon Walter 20 February 2024

Feel and flow is flawless.

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